WHY ARTISTS ARE ECCENTRIC (Read: Nuts)

Eighteen hours into my first urban painting of Bangkok and I've already got one foot in the looney-bin.  I thought I was getting somewhere with this piece, but I neared completion only to be utterly unenthusiastic about the near-final product.  The only thing left to do (no time to start over) is to rework the piece.  Change the textures, tones, shading, details, and palette.  Very upsetting.  Here's the piece before it's reworked (God help me).  Any non-celestial suggestions are also, as always, welcome.

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